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Like rose petals falling
From dark stormy skies
Into the pure white snow.
My love's tears are falling
Red from her eyes
Into the grounds below.

She stares up in silence
At her savior moon
With eloquent prayers to the gods.
To release all the violence
That she's known too soon
Forced to suffer against all odds.

She stands in the moonlight
Plain as can be
Her emotions flowing out in a flood.
I watch through the dark night
Where all I can see
Are her sorrowful tears of blood.
:iconsilver-moonlight:

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#26 of the 200 challenge - Tears.

I am so incredibly happy that I got to use the word eloquent.

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:iconsilver-moonlight:
Thanks. ^_^

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"I reject your reality, and substitute my own." ~Adam Savage, Mythbusters
:iconmithrilundomiel:
You're welcome, i've never put some poetry as favourite, yours were the first :)

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:iconsilver-moonlight:
Oh, wow. Thanks, again! =D

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:icondawneatsdishsoap:
This is absolutely beautiful.
:iconsilver-moonlight:
Thanks. =D

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"I reject your reality, and substitute my own." ~Adam Savage, Mythbusters

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